Wanyo's Reviews

[Dawn of the Dead in Milto]

Exellent with a little work needed

Great job! The animation, art, coloring, shading, ect. were nice, crisp and relatively smooth.

The fonts and visibility of the text could be worked on. Be careful of contrast with the background and the fonts.

The only other thing you could work on were the voiceovers. It was nice and clear but sounded a bit over the top. Perhaps too much yelling and the dialogue was poor.

Otherwise awesome job! Tweak out your next animation and it'll be sweet.

[Salad Fingers Episode 4]

a sigh of relief

After watching the third episode, I thought the series was going to take a turn for the worse. However this one was much farther from trying too hard and much more random in an orginized way. The "hand job bars" scene was a little over the top, but amusing none-the-less. It was also nice to see some more music added to change the mood. Keep up the good work!

[The NewGrounds Machine]

Interesting concept

It was quite an interesting concept. I liked the idea at the end with the blam and protect votes. The music fit appropriately and worked well with the concept.

The art was a bit lackluster with an overuse of gradients and a lack of added stylish effects to give things a more metal look. I liked the green liquid, it looked good and added some nice contrast to the series of grays and gradients used. You could have added with the machine concept and added more parts to it. I'd like to see more of an assembly line that could have worked with the music well. It has that "working man" kinda feel to it. The art at the end seemed thrown together compared to the rest of the movie.

It started off a bit slow which may have turned off some veiwers, though I'm glad I stuck around for the latter half.

Keep going with the good work and keep honing your skills!

[Exmortis]

Awesome!

At first I wasn't sure about the graphics, ecspecially being a little low quality at points. But by the end I was quite compelled to finish and really scared. It was really moody and scary and the sound worked awesome with the storyline. I got two of the endings. I'm wondering if there are more than two. Do you need to find the girl to finish it? Suggestions for the future, fix a little bit of the scripting so you don't have to do things over if you go back into certain rooms and tweak the background graphics just a little. Great game, it's going on my favorites!

[Mutations creations(DEMO)]

Different

I truely respect the coding and the pure randomenss to it. It was more fun with my own text and stuff. I wouldn't mind seeing another one of these with different soundtracks and such. My only suggestion would be to and one more level of interactivity to it and perhaps some slightly clearer instructions. Otherwise it may just be left on the wayside with the other "crazy" flash movies.

[Mega Man Song Library 1]

Kinda novel but...

It needs that extra something to seperate this from just another sound player. Mouseovers perhaps, button pressing sounds, better buttons to switch between the games, better graphics other than the ripped sprites. Add that and I think you got yourself a winner. BTW, I liked the preloader with the different bosses, my only other advisement there is to let people know they can do that while it's loading. Pretty it up a bit and things will be great.

~Real reviews are the key!
Wayne

xritualfaminex responds:

and real reviews will always be appreciated here. To be brutally honest, i was in a slight rush to get this up, it's been about 3 months since i've submitted anything. All that you said will be taken into consideration though. thanks.